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Superior Origins pg.1 by Kaufee Superior Origins pg.1 by Kaufee
It begins witha bang!!!
Preview art for upcoming original comic set in Chicago!!!
Interested? Check this [link] Stay Tuned...

*Feedback or Critique Encouraged*

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Beserk Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011   Traditional Artist
nice buildings
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Artificient Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
If you ask me, I think the bean looks like the space ship from the movie "Flight of the Navigator" What if it is an alien space ship made out of liquid metal like the T1000 from Terminator 2? Sure I saw them make it, They weld it together in pieces but they also had a large tarp over the scaffolds. Maybe the liquid metal separated into pieces to make it look like the were welding it & merged back together after they where together again. What better place to hide an alien space ship than in plane sight & disguised as modern art.
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Kaufee Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for the detailed/deep feedback! You can really see how Chicago would be a great backdrop for many amazing stories
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hiop48 Featured By Owner May 7, 2011
jam that like wow
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Josephine-LeClaire Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Professional General Artist
wow amazing backgrounds! I knew where we were instantly!
although I would recommend in the future keeping the action moving left to right. right now you have it going from right to left, which is counter-intuitive for the reader.
Also, that sun you drew on the bean makes me sad.
But this page is really awesome and makes me interested about more to come from you!
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Kaufee Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Excellent advice, I was concentrating on telling the story top to bottom and the ship happens to come in from the right, probably would have worked better from left.
Why does the sun make you sad?
Thanks for the in depth feedback!
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Josephine-LeClaire Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2011  Professional General Artist
heh, because it's sort-of the generic sun that kids would draw if you said "Draw me a sun", no offense or anything.
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Kaufee Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
ON the left, thats supposed to be the glare of the sun and not an actual reflection, although it's poorly executed. And on the right is the reflection of the smoking ship headed at the Bean.
Kinda learning as I go...
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Josephine-LeClaire Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Professional General Artist
lol we all are!

I did mean the sun on the left.
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